Comments : Withering Away.

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Great ryme, each line has a decent flow, the s tory and sadness potrayed is clearly visible within each line and word you wrote.

    5/5

  • Wow
    Your a reallly great writter

    I love this piece

    xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow this was a very strong an emotional piece...I liked it quite a lot actually and I wish that I could say how much this piece made me feel but I am limited on time..sadly...So i will say something short and sweet.

    "It's like my tears conspired against me, slowly taking my strength away.
    They waited until I was to weak to fight back, they waited for this day."

    That was so very powerful. I absolutely loved those two lines. They made me really feel the emotion in this poem.