Wow this was a really deep poem. Great job. Shanik

This is better.

Great way of putting that - words ruining the moment. It's interesting and clear. Glad to see you back, volcano man.

Amazing poem, very deep and holds so much meaning. I loved the images you portrayed, and you got your message across very clearly. A enjoyable write, 5/5 from me. Take care and forever keep writing~God Bless!