Forever Liz

by Nicko   Feb 19, 2009


Closing my eye's, I see her
A tranquil vision
Peacefully she stands upon an isolated jetty
Face bathed profile
A dark silhouette
Haloed by the moonlit water
Hair billowing, black ringlets buffeted by breeze
Frock dusting her bare calves
Tall, lithe, beautiful

With bare feet intimate with the roughened planks
She gently, proudly walks to the jetty's edge
Fearful we call out
Her ears forever deaf
Yet, never taking that final step, she turns
Forgiving smile touches us
She stands, she waits
Never far from view
Forever before us
Forever young
Forever Liz

Written for Elisabetta, a member of our club who died at the age of 21 from cancer.

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  • 12 years ago

    by aminath

    Beautiful imagery here. Enjoyed reading.

  • 12 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    The first stanza is absolutley beautiful, I love how so much imagery is protryed!

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... Beautiful poem... I loved everything about it.. You painted a beautiful vision of Elisabetta... I am really sorry for your loss.. But you have portrayed her in a beautiful way and I'm sure she would love and appreciate this poem. It's a shame I never got to know her. Excellent write

  • 14 years ago

    by Jamie

    Amazing poem nicko.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is such a beautiful poem. I love the flow of this and how powerful it was. I love the imagery and how clearly the emotions are expressed. Nice work. Nik

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