Fourth line "over y lips;" "y" should be "your"?
Line 14 "of you memories " "you" should be "your"(?), "suffocate my" to "suffocates"
As I do not understand this style as poetry,
to me it is more prose, I do not feel qualified to comment more on either content or construction.

I really liked the originality of this poem, It was unique in its own. The flow was good, but the structure was just okay for me. I show you how to fix the structure in a minute.

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"(Love you?)
It's not a question, it's simply a unconscious reaction.

Oh, I remember the day when the taste of your love cowered over y lips; it quivers, teasingly tempting me to lick my lips again."

^^ I believe in the second line, you meant "your" and not "y" Now as far as the structure, I would've liked to see it in the form of stanzas.

Here is an example:

(Love you?)
It's not a question,it's simply an unconscious reaction.
Oh, I remember the day when the taste of your love cowered over your lips; it quivers, teasingly tempting me to lick my lips again.

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Overall a wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. You have talent, keep up the great work!

Peace, Joe

The title 'The Blind Coud Even Witness Our Love' the word 'coud' I think should be 'could'
'y' should be 'yr' or 'your'

I enjoyed the reading