Interpretation

by Beautiful Chaos   Feb 19, 2009


Such beauty in your sadness
Glassy blue eyes
Quivering ruby pout
A softness only pain can bring

You make me want to love you
Hold you
Immortalize you
With the tip of my pen

As your hair falls over your face
Shadow takes you
A living sketch
Capturing your vulnerability

It is in this infinite sadness
That you are still
A prisoner to the eye
Masks lifted from the soul

No ink
No colour
Could truly hold your form
It is selfish

A want to preserve
Just one small piece
Something tangible
Beyond this body

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  • 6 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    This one is so nice,it deserves winning

  • 6 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Was completely mesmerised with this write....you captured and portrayed the vulnerability of sadness in a deep and profound way..wonderfully penned.

  • 8 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This was absolutely breathtaking.

    <A softness only pain can bring> this played out very well in my mind, and I can imagine how this must feel. The feelings you've employed are stupendous, and really a joy to read.

    <A want to preserve
    Just one small piece
    Something tangible
    Beyond this body> BEAUTIFUL! :) I loved that stanza. Something about it just sparked something inside me, and I felt like reading your poem twice. It's wonderful. Really, it is. :)

    Bri~

  • 8 years ago

    by Lu

    Congrats on the win Jenn !!!

    A wonderful read, very deserving of the front pages.

    No ink
    No colour
    Could truly hold your form
    It is selfish
    ^^^
    Loved this part !!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Not what I though it was going to be about. Well done good imagry and word flow.

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