<A softness only pain can bring> this played out very well in my mind, and I can imagine how this must feel. The feelings you've employed are stupendous, and really a joy to read.
<A want to preserve
Just one small piece
Beyond this body> BEAUTIFUL! :) I loved that stanza. Something about it just sparked something inside me, and I felt like reading your poem twice. It's wonderful. Really, it is. :)