Flower

by timmy   Feb 21, 2009


This flower is all I have left of you now
As its pedals break making but a sound
Feeling as if his love has died
Even his best friend won't make him survive

All your colors are fading to gray
If you could cry I bet you would right away
A heart you wish you had would be on the ground
Probably in pieces broken and worn down

Just lay in your sanctuary which you thought was home
It's just a fray of everything I've ever known
There's nothing wrong about dying here now
Let life flow on and take its course please

Any minute now... you'll finally drown.

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  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Wow great one i liked it

    Just lay in your sanctuary which you thought was home
    It's just a fray of everything I've ever known .....a tip top piece keep up 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Amazing poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    That's an amazing poem, but you have one grammatical . You wrote "pedals," instead of "petals." Pedals are on a bicycle; petals are on flowers.

    5/5
    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Loved this poem. Keep up the great work hun never stop writing. Trust me u will never feel the same when u do.

  • 12 years ago

    by ImperfectlyBeautiful

    That was beautiful i love it!!
    keep up the good work!!! rtf?

    <Katie

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