A very powerful message , if only we could all come to see how important peace really is. excellent write.

Adel,
You write such exquisite works and combine them with so much passion. I adore your writing and think you have written some really great pieces of late. This reminds me of the song Imagine. If only peace were to exist, we would all be better people.

Adel
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. Your exquisite words really have a way of touching each reader. Opening their eyes to many things. One day maybe Peace will ring around the world.
Excellent job my friend!
Take care
Cindy

//but who am I to take
what is not own mine//

^^... beautiful write... and this could be interpreted in lot of ways... in different perspective ... if only everyone could feel the meaning of these lines...

very powerful write...

What a powerful piece. I agree with Lonely Rider, if everyone could feel the true meaning of those lines....I would have liked it better for structures sake if you had divided the pice into stanzas. None-the-less, it was superb!