The Saltiest River

by Christina Gomes   Feb 26, 2009


I closed my eyes, just as
you told me to.
Stripped all my worries
for they had no purpose to you.

I climbed on a feather.
You found your own bird.
I let the Wind guide me
as you flew with the Herd.

It did not take long;
too quickly to me.
For whomever to decide
to decide this decree.

The saltiest of rivers;
the Wind following its course,
slowly less able, to resist
the Gravitational Force.

I lay there floating
on the saltiest river of all.
I let the Wind guide me
as if I never did fall.

I let the Wind guide me;
saw the world through new eyes.
We crossed paths again
just at the point of your demise

You asked about my journey;
I told you the Wind blew me around.
You laughed half-heartedly
until I slowly heard no sound.

You sank into the river:
the saltiest river of all.
And I let the Wind guide me
Smiling, as I recall.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    They are not random at all, actually. in fact you're right, they do have a bigger meaning. the point is to get to the reader to think and figure it out :]

  • 15 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Once again your rhyming is really good. I was curious, why do you capitalise random words? I was thinking maybe those specific words were actually signifying something bigger, like a higher being and that's why they were capitalised... but it just kind of confused me. Either way, I enjoyed the read. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I am really impressed the depth of this one is the spice that will keep me pondering for days and that is just the way I love great poetry. The flawless flow also satifies my tastes
    well done
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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