Comments : I Remember Childhood

  • 14 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I remember childhood
    The things we used to do
    How I used to laugh and play
    And just have fun with you

    ^I remember this with my bestf "loser" his nickname from me. how we would laugh all the time we would hang out it was heaven with him. a lovely way of openin ur poem to us here. nicely done =]

    I remember childhood
    When you blamed me for all your crimes
    Then you'd play with our nephews
    While I served your time-out times

    ^this part made me laugh remembering that my lil bro does this to me. still does. IM the one getting in trouble not him. Grrr... anger n frustation wen i do but then time flies we laugh bout it. i like this part. flow very nice as well

    I remember childhood
    And all your tomboy acts
    The way you picked up bugs and dirt
    Our 'sisters always' pacts

    ^hmm.... i like this.

    I remember childhood
    When you still cared when I cried
    Back when you'd still hug me
    Before that part of you died

    ^awwwwwwwwww... this so trulie sad. the last stanzal here was very deep and dark n heartbreaking. wow. powerful words u use.

    I remember childhood
    My carefree older sister
    The one who talked till we fell asleep
    And now I kind of miss her

    ^time change the best things in people it sucks at times. =(

    I remember childhood
    Playmobiles and Barbie fun
    Playing school and make-believe
    Until childhood was done

    ^awww... this reminded me of my lil bro again. wen we were like that no make up nope nope dnt do that. lol nope we hardlie talk, play video n stuff mostly just fight with each other which hurts like a....

    I remember childhood
    Those pre-adolescent years
    When everything I said was wrong
    And you were the cause of my tears

    ^aww... very meaning n sad part.

    I remember childhood
    The years nothing stayed the same
    When your emotions went up and down
    And you decided I was lame

    ^dang this was wow. this person thought u were lame naw u r not. ur word have a way of tellin there story if u know what im sayin. cuz i tend to confuse ppl a lot. lol

    I remember childhood
    But we're both older than we were
    We've grown up and grown away
    That's one thing I know for sure

    ^yup, we are grow up sumtime even wen we dnt want to. i know i dnt but i also know i will

    I remember childhood
    Those little girls who thought they had it all
    The same girls who look at their world crashing down
    Unable to help the other not fall

    ^i like it. i wouldnt change a thing

    I remember childhood
    When Mom and Dad were always there
    Lifting us up and bringing us down
    So we knew they'd always care

    ^parents always do that i hate that. but still they care.

    I remember childhood
    And the day I watched that old cat die
    I recall having to tell you the news
    It was one of the last times I've seen you cry

    ^sorta lost me here.

    I remember childhood
    When I knew what was in your heart
    I never knew that growing up to you
    Meant we would drift apart

    ^awww.. simple words but very touchin n sad.

    I remember childhood
    The way it used to be
    Before you went to this other place
    Where there was no room for me

    ^last line was indeed sumthin i can relate to. being left behind cuz sumone is headed of you.

    I remember childhood
    And all the times we'd fight
    Finding pleasure in the fact
    That we would always end up alright

    ^yup yup true n laugh bout it in the end n joke around n it happens all again like a weird mad cycle.

    I remember childhood
    And I don't want to say goodbye
    Are you going to leave just like that?
    Or should we give us one more try?

    ^questions love poems with questions =) makes me think lol

    I remember childhood
    When I knew I couldn't hide
    From my sister's way of knowing me
    And all I kept inside

    ^hide and go seek that poped in my mind wen i read this lol

    I remember childhood
    All the things we used to do
    I'm trying to find my sister again
    Some days I don't see her in you

    ^OH Wow this was very powerful and so sad.

    I remember childhood...

    Walk with me down memory lane.

    Copyright 2009 S. Sieglaff

    ^nice way of ending it. i libut!!! amazin job
    5/5

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy