I really liked this poem! If someone read this to me when they were explaining why we needed time apart I might actually understand what was going on! The rhyme of the poem sounded a bit stilted in my head, but that seemed to add to the emotion in my view. I think there might be a problem here? "To spread our your wings " I loved it! 5/5.

I like your rhyming style for real I thought dylan was the only one that could rhyme four without using a little too much force and your message is loud and clearly free wheelin

That was a great poem :]
Good rhyme scheme and great flow. I loved it
5/5