Comments : Georgie-The Vampire Mouse

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay....this is adorable....I know your little niece will love it :)
    Good job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    This was sweet, charming and very well written! It's difficult to write poetry like this. The rhyme makes it quite a quick read, bounces along very well. Unique, and I really enjoyed reading this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Great job. I am smiling from ear to ear. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    This is a very unusual poem since the mouse is usually the one being eaten. Nicley written and lovley flow. It's really funny how the little mouse cannot eat any dairy too. GREAT write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    Kay How great! this is a perfect childrens poem, full of fun ! awesome.

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This one is really cool, very nicely written and so nicely presented. Great imagination.

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Scrittore

    I love the way your poems flow so perfectly! The subject is very cute and imaginative :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Haha..this is just cute & funny! I like the
    flow and the feelings in this poem. Enjoyed this very much..take care.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    This poem is funny & cute at the same time...Its was really enjoyable to read. and the flow was amazing. keep me laughing

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What great imagination! Wonderful that you got to do this with your daughter. I bet she was tickled! I am sure your niece will like it, it is cute and funny! Great rhythm and rhyme too :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    LOL! The image of vampire mice is too funny. And the poor tail-less cats! Since your Southern, I can hear the rhyme of "well" and tail" :-D

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Poor kiities. Love it good flow and image.

  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I dig this poem. I normaly don't read this type of poems but the title cought my eye. vary nice.