I actually think that the poem flows nicely, and what really amazed me was the capturing of a pure moment of love, and then connecting it through all the moments that are coming after that. I especially liked these lines:
"I only wished to fall back asleep
To see what made me smile
Fall in that dream that I hoped was deep
Because its been awhile,"-----------I love these lines, because when something hurts me, I just wanna go to sleep and remember the good times.
I really think it's a nice piece.
5/5. Keep it up. :)

Beautifly done.... the feeling i get from the words is overwhelming. Good job
5/5