Comments : Evolved soul

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well, I am glad the man you are talking about found his destiny and his peace.
    I love the message in this verse:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful poem.

    Now living a life of his own
    Painting,playing flute
    Reviving his passions

    How many people there are that live their lives to please others and not themselves.

    Living his true self
    A soul fully contented
    Courage has to dwell
    In every soul to follow one's heart

    I think the hardest part is to take that first step to thnk of yourself and persue your dreams.

    God give every soul the strength
    To gather oneself
    To know one's true self

    A wonderful message in your poem :)
    Great job!
    Take Care
    God Bless
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Now thats really a very deep poem, beautifully presented indeed.

    We all need that strength from God.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Living his true self
    A soul fully contented
    Courage has to dwell
    In every soul to follow one's heart

    This verse is so true. One needs courage
    to follow his/her heart rather then doing what
    others say! A write that shows hope as well
    as courage :)

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    So nicely written. I wonder if we ever find ones true self. There are so many faces or sides to our make up.
    This had an easy flow and a realistic message. Enjoyable

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wonderfully written with alot of thought and emotion put into it. 5/5, Em x

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    It sounds like a wonderful life indeed. So many of us are caught up in living a life we don't really want. What heaven to do what our heart truly desires.