Comments : Half Smile

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    I love the flow of this piece Jeannie ... the words just sweep you away.

    ~ wipes tear ~ such a touching read Auntie !
    Someday the smile will be full hun ... someday ~hugs~

  • 14 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    That was just absolutely marvelous! So beautiful, Jeannie.

    I loved the line...

    <Inside the dawning of the day
    You fade against the sun
    But true you seem to follow me
    At night when day is done.>

    ^^ that just took my breathe away, and as I read the rest of the poem... well, I was speechless. I don't know what to say, this poem was just so spectacular.

    5/5

    Bri~

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    I love the flow of this poem. Seems a very effortless writing. Wonderfully written lines... Nicely done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Ahhh ... the hidden pleasures of escaping into our dreams. Nicely written.