HAHAHA.

by xx   Mar 27, 2009


Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.

Sorry, I was young.

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  • 15 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    Very good! It's really cute and I'm sorta going through the same thing. Hope everything works out with you and that special guy! 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    AWWWWWWW! I feel your confusing emotions! This poems is so well written, it's like I was there with you, like you were telling me about this boy and I was there to comfort you. It's beautiful! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    I just love how you put names in the poems!
    I must say, I was being surprized throughout the poem, because, the first three stanzas made it look like a break-up poem, then it made me think it was about a boyfriend, and in the end, you give the reader the truth-this boy is your friend, but you don't know whether you are truly in love with him, or not.
    I can relate to this very well, exept for the name, hehe, but I've been in love with a friend before(a classmate), and I felt all of those things you describe that you feel when you're around him. My favourite lines are:
    "No, I'm not in love with you.
    Who am I trying to assure?
    Am I trying to assure you,
    So that you can be with her?"---because here you give your love a glimpse of light, that maybe this boy loves you too, and if he knew about your love, he'd be with you.
    I liked how you changed the last two lines of the repeating-stanza. Like you finally realized you are in love.:)
    Nice work. I enjoyed this one a lot.
    5/5 keep it up, you make great pieces. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Shadow Heart

    I really like it!

    5/5.