Comments : Are You Only Sleeping?

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    OMG! this poem is so good! its very well ritten, a great flow and understanding and its sad! very very well done.. 5 outta 5.

    (Last line 2nd paragraph -- I pray that you are ONLY sleeping flows better as well as last line last paragraph -- I only hear one heart, And IT"S weeping)

    Other then that PERFECT!!
    Keep it up!
    *Hunny*

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    Oops bad memory lol. i mean -- I hear no heart but mine and IT'S weeping.
    This flows better (last time i 4got what the line said lol)

  • 14 years ago

    by LexiAlexanderz Manicluv

    This is an amazing poem its beautiful and sad