Comments : What Words Can Do

  • 8 years ago

    by Knee

    Hey I thought this is for the contest !
    I loved the prelude the most, the poem kinda grew weak at the end..but the wording was very intelligent and great =)
    Loved the title.
    I really missed your poems !
    Write on.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michel

    Really nice poem.
    keep writing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Trinity Lee

    A very very emotional poem
    And one that I felt I could connect with
    The poem was full of meaning
    I'm glad that it was written n the way it was
    As if the flow had been too forced
    It may have taken away from the motion

    Really good poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Jad

    This was a very good poem. This is sadly true though in a lot of relationships. Loved the emotion. Austin

  • 6 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    A strong write. I found this poem to be moving and it brings up many questions as to why relationships don't work out

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I miss your writing <3 :) :)

    "I never quite understood your reasons
    For staying in a dying relationship
    There was never any hope between us
    Just an empty outlet of lustful words"

    This is awesome..omgggg...please please write again!