Sasha,

This is really an outstanding poem.
Hat's off for you, you crafted it so beautifully.

Your eyes are a lighthouse that lead me to shore
Capturing the essence of emotions unknown before
Take me away to a land, where we shall never age
You're the beginning of my life's very first page

^^^
Can I go there too, to that land where we don't age?

Excellent work:)

*hugs*

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