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  • 14 years ago

    by jescelle

    Wow... :) thank u much!

  • 14 years ago

    by adroit

    Wow! Meritable poem! The rhythm and flow of it are superb. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Joyce Duboise

    WOW. You sure do put my poetry to shame. Great Work. I love your thought process.

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    My style in almost every poem is to rhyme and keep the flow perfect. I feel the great writers can get the same message across while rhyming as others do without. This was a unique poem and the word play was excellent. anybody can write a 6 line poem and have somebody give them a 5/5 but this one earns it nice work

  • 14 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Amazing flow rhythm & rhyme sharing in a general way mostly the dark past

    You really have great style
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 13 years ago

    by Teria

    Love it

    Especially;
    "Extinguished soul in a tiny frame.
    Keeping. Weeping. Sweeping away-
    Raped. Escaped. But still remains."
    And, the last line is like BOOM

    Very catchy. Very Nice. Amazing poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Lemma

    Wow check out that awesome rhythm! It's like "punch punch pow!" Very very effective with great use of vocab, rhyme and varied stanza length. One line that jumped out at me for a reason I can't put my finger on was "make up the game but never win." It was just awesome. If I could give this a 6 I would. Definitely going into my list of favourite poems and you're now on my list of favourite authors. Thanks for this one!