Surprise Surprise

by Countess of Monte Cristo   Apr 7, 2009


Screams, and threats and slaps and spits.
That's what i got above your hits.
You see those tears coming out of my eyes?
I finally admit my weakness, surprise surprise.

But, hold on a minute because things do change.
You can't stop what fate has arranged.
You will go down when i go way up.
You're not invincible, you're just strange.

You talk about values yet you have none.
You act the victim like you really are one.
But, oh, how transparent are your lies.
I finally saw through you, surprise surprise.

Jealousy is eating you and it just won't stop.
I promise you won't always remain on top.
When you least expect it, you'll reach demise.
For in the end you're a human, surprise surprise.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Big thumbs up, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Laith

    Wow... Can I say That was the best poem I have ever read on This site... it kindda read it self with that easily beat within it

  • 14 years ago

    by Laith

    Wow... Can I say That was the best poem I have ever read on This site... it kindda read it self with that easily beat within it

  • 15 years ago

    by Marie

    I love it!!!!! ! its extremly powerful. love the meaning and i can feel the intensity. Awesome job. 5/5

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