Comments : Band-Aids

  • 14 years ago

    by jescelle

    Heyy!
    im sorry ur feeling so low.. im here if u need to talk...
    i loved the emotion, but the rythem went off a few times. it didnt really take me away from bein in ur shoes tho, thats 4 sure ;)
    this part was my favorite
    "A shell so broken and empty
    that a tiny little push would break
    A million little pieces that no one will see
    because those are the scars that I make"

    5/5! come check mine out and comment? thanx! xo
    Jescelle (Belle)

  • 14 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Amazing. From every poem that I have read of yours thus far, this one is by far the most amazing. I love it. And I connect with it as well.
    If you need anyone to talk to, though you don't know me, I'm here if you need a friend.
    10/10 Keep up the amazing work.