Victim of Love

O.m.g such simple, simple words had such a powerful meanin and heartbreaking touch that many people felt. i sure have. i love it. my 2rd favorite. nicely done.
5/5

TaKe caRe,
Frenchy

Nice job !! I liked this short and simple poem. I think I have left my own pile of rubble behind at some point in my life where others have chosen to stumble around in it - looking for whatever they can find. I think the words you chose were just right and the meaning of each line seemed to come through OK. keep up the nice writes. Peace - Tom

Good poem and though it was short it was to the point. The flow was good and it had a good concept. The poem also had a good rhyme as well. Good job.

Your poem was really strong because of the format and the way you kept it short. Very powerful lines and indeed..all you said was so very true:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, that was pretty great. I really like the style of writing you used. And how short you kept it, I think that if you lengthened it, it woulnd't work out as well. I, also, like how you defined the words you used. this is quite a unique style to write in, good job.

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