In Hiding

I like this and it has alot of potential.
I especially like the 'If you stumble into who I am along the way,
be sure to introduce me' very powerful.
5/5, Em xx

You ask that I let the real me reveal herself to you
How can that be if shes anonymous to me?

*This was my favorite part :) I can really relate to what you're saying here. The way you worded it was very clever and interesting. A very unique poem hun. I hope you finish it. Keep it up. Nik*

I really like this poem. It asks several questions like "Who am I? What am I? Am I different than who I feel I am?" I really liked these lines in particular:

"If you stumble into who I am along the way,
be sure to introduce me.

You ask that I let the real me reveal herself to you
How can that be if shes anonymous to me?"

Very nice job, I hope to see more like this from you :)

Nothing better to read than one's thoughts of inner revelation!!
inner discovery beautifully captured!!
keep it up;)

Aw... This poem is so nice! I can really relate to it... I loved how you express so much depth in a short poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
I loved these stanzas:

"You ask that I let the real me reveal herself to you
How can that be if shes anonymous to me?

But then again, maybe it's lucky she is in hiding
The thought of being in this world without a shield
Is like a soldier going to war without armor."

Great job! :)