Once Again

You can just feel the twisted emotion in this. The everyday stress of life.
once again great job.=]

victoria

Awww. very nice poem. But look to the bright side of things and maybe it wasn't ment to be. If they don't love you whats the point to be with them any way. good job 5/5

Holy wow....
really good job...
no...
great job...
amazing<3

**Im getting tired of this crap.

This flows better 4 me thort id let you know. lol

*Hunny*

Once Again it happened
I was shot out of the sky
This time for no real reason
I felt my heart die

^^Rhyming was good. I stuttered when i red these lines 4 sum reason.. maybe it was the flow?

Once again it happened
My heart was torn from my chest
Now i dont know what to do
I feel like I am dead to the rest

^^great rhyming & flow. it fitted perfect.

Once again it happened
I'm getting really tired of this crap
But i guess its inevitable
Maybe.. I'll take an endless nap

^^This expressed alot in these short lines, great flow & rhymes.

Well done. Keep it up!
*Hunny*