I got a little confused at the end but i love dit really :)

firstly Santa not Stanta just thought i'd put that out there.

anyway i love it when people put fairy tales into there poems it gives it mor eimagination in my opinion.. the whole peter pan thing worked and i loved it.

the flow of the poem was rather quick and i didn't notice anywhere in which it went of the tracks so thats a big bonus.

its was a quirky little poem that kinda can lead you of into alot of directions but first class