Your eyes are windows to your soul

by DreamingOutLoud   Apr 19, 2009


Look at me
Look into my eyes
Are you scared?
So am I
Dip your soul into my heart
Do you feel my love?
Neither do I

Look at me
Search for my mistakes
Reward me with your punishments
I no longer care

I want to serve the time for my actions
Life/Death; it's no different when you're suffering
I can no longer breathe
These sins are living inside of me

Look at me, really look at me
Look into my eyes
Are you scared, scared of I?
So am I...
Grab my hand, pattern my thoughts
Make me feel like I am nothing at all

I don't deserve my feet to touch the ground
I don't deserve for my prayers to make a sound
I don't deserve to think in a strangers mind
You don't need me in your life, so I'm leaving myself behind; blink.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    WOW

  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    A great piece. A wonderful choice of words and emotions, i could feel them as i read. A deep powerful piece. And the form it was written in is unique, loved it. 5/5

    Ashlei.

  • 14 years ago

    by Francis Gagiano

    This was amazingly deep... I know exactly what you mean...

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was amazing. I felt so many raw and heartfelt emotions here. The style is different, but it works here. I love how deep this was. You weren't afraid to give this poem your all. Very nice work. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by Saul

    OMG! This just grabs your attention and won't let go! The only bad thing is that it ends!

    "Grab my hand, pattern my thoughts
    Make me feel like I am nothing at all"

    Great line!! Keep writing!!

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