Invincible

by Chocolate Addict   Apr 20, 2009


Rooted to the ground
million of faces past her by
invincible to the public eye
does anyone even care
if she lives or die?

criminal of her own sins
prison within her own skin
hell breaks loose when,
she's torn from within

lessons of life
tattooed on her mind
six shots of vodka
is all she need
to erase away all her regrets

intoxicated;
she emerged with
visions vividly clear
(no matter who you are,
where you're from,
there's a reason for you to be here)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I really like this so much

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The rhythm and rhyme here deliver a very important wisdom at the end

    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    Awwww, I love this " no matter where you are, theres a reason for you to be here. Very true. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    "lessons of life
    tattooed on her mind
    six shots of vodka
    is all she need
    to erase away all her regrets." I really enjoyed reading this poem. This is my favorite stanza. Great choice of words. very well done,kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    Brilliant poem i liked it a lot the rythem was good and the words went well together

    well done

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