Comments : My Last Goodbye

  • 14 years ago

    by Odessa

    I truly like this poem. It screams the truth in the face of those who do not want to see

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Great emotions and dynamics in this poem. I like the way you counted his life down with the number of pills.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dorothy

    Thats good i like the fact that u can read it more that one way and kinda get a new meaning out of it

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Seventeen pills, I begin to weep
    Eighteen pills, for eternal sleep
    Nineteen pills, with tears in my eyes
    Twenty pills, my last goodbye

    ^^ Thats my fav stanza, its the perfect end to a great poem. It wraps its up very well. I liked how it was so original. Your choice of wording went well with this poem and your rhyme scheme wasnt forced. A very sad and intense write, but youve done an excellent job. Great work, 5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Wow - intense. i liked this very much - reminded me of past times - mistakes. remembering that to what life i have now i can see how far i have came.

    good work angel

    IBE
    X

  • 14 years ago

    by Niveus Nox

    Holy crap! I love this one!