MaryAnne,

I am glad you kept your first verses/ songs.
This one is nice, really nice.

When you read lyrics on the net, they often look a little like tho one you made:)

You're gone for good,
No turning back,
What had I done wrong?
I only said a few words,
Before you were gone,
I need you forever and ever.

^^
I am sure a lot of readers will be able to relate to these lines!

*hugs*

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