I gave this poem a 5 cause it's touching to me. I read this as if it wasn't for me and I really enjoyed it. I rate it a 5 though I would rate even higher if I could. It's short, sweet, and beautiful. Yes you used the same words a few times but that really doesn't matter. What matters is that you write with your heart not write with others approval in mind thus this was a fantastic poem and a joy for me to read. Mahal kita beautiful ^_~"