Comments : Beyond The Shadows

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Scary, well written and it kept me interested from start to finish MaryAnne!

    At the moment its prey turns away, unknowing of its fate,
    Leaping into action, the fast animal seizes the game,
    Angrily ripping flesh off without a single strain,
    Making a clean kill, aimed right into their heart.

    ^^
    This is so scary, I hope I never come across a beast like this!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid