Bee Line

I spied them up ahead
So I made a bee line
Along with the other bees
Repeating
My heart beating:
"Lilacs! Lilacs! Lilacs!"

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14 years ago
by Daisy if you do

Oh aren't they beautiful. I think after the long winter any sign of spring and we are all like bees buzzing going straight to the source. What a delightful poem. Great Job
14 years ago
by Courageous Dreamer

What a unique poem, the bees lined in a row on their way to the lilacs. Beautiful imagery, although a short poem.

5/5.

Temps [Beyond a Poets Mind]
14 years ago
by Cindy

Corinne
I can smell them now :)
Wonderful!
~hugs~
Cindy
14 years ago
by Sylvia

Not only a nature poem but the image of bees on their way to lilacs along beside you, that makes me smile. Lilacs are wonderful. Good job.