The title caught my attention immediately, though the actual contents of the poem made my attention stray for some of the lines.

''Til this final day
Cursed by black rain'

These two lins jumped out at me. The metaphor of black rain intrigued me, and while it is often used you used in in a way that really brought out an air of mystery. 4/5

Its too sad :( I like it though. Reminds me of my ex lol. I hurt when I read it, but good job lots of emotion 5/5