I'm Useless Without You

by Anthony Duvalle   Apr 29, 2009


Your voice sails smoothly through me
Taking time
Lounging in my heart

My hands are tools for unwrapping
Your secret fears
And taking them apart

Your heart is more than a rhythm
Producing sound
Conducting my minds flow

My heart is more than a rhythm
Keeping up
Making sure you know

That my hands are useless without
Your perfect voice
To sooth my worried mind

And my heart is useless without
Your beating heart
To which the key I will find

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kaila

    I'm confused. The first two stanzas don't hold the same theme as the others unless I'm missing it? They carry almost the same line but I don't see it in the beginning which kind of threw me for a second. I liked this poem. But nothing was enticing about it. Here are some suggestions:

    try to use same syllabol count: it will make your flow more together and attract the reader

    Try synonyms: they work to spice up vocabulary

    Keep writing
    4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    My hands are tools for unwrapping
    Your secret fears
    And taking them apart

    It's a beauty. The poem, wonderfully depicts the strength and power of the love you both share! I love it. 5/5

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