Comments : When I Build My Masterpiece

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    This was a very interesting poem that I found really interesting. The flow of the poem was good and so was the rhyme. The emotion in the poem was really good as well. So keep on writing and keep up the good work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    I feel this sounds more like song. It's like lyric. Ami I wrong? Nice reading!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    An enjoyable read that as Sourav said is similar to a song, good rhythm and wording.

    Em