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by Corinne   Apr 30, 2009


A father in his thirties
Snapped pictures
Of his tween daughter

"Shake your hair out"
And she swung it
This way and that

"Beautiful", he said
And she beamed
Flashing orthodontia

4th poem in a series written during recent visit to Botanic Gardens

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I loved reading this! ..as I could just "picture" it happening. I like your style of writing... how you can take everyday things, and craft them into a beautiful poem , that brings a smile. :] BRILLIANT!

  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    I enjoyed the everyday matter of factness about this. A poloroid in poem form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very sweet images, such a relevant poem! Again, love your observations and your style. I like the gentle tone in this piece, very nice! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Corinne,
    It is so amazing to me what inspires you to write a poem. I shouldn't be suprised I am inspired by a lot of the same but I just can't pen them like you do. I can just picture you passing by this father and daughter and him getting her to pose around the beautiful flowers showing off her braces. Beautfiul Job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    I smiled while reading this. I could see the dad beaming at his daughter. Great job!
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

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