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  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A small "snapshot" of life as we see it happening. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    I smiled while reading this. I could see the dad beaming at his daughter. Great job!
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Corinne,
    It is so amazing to me what inspires you to write a poem. I shouldn't be suprised I am inspired by a lot of the same but I just can't pen them like you do. I can just picture you passing by this father and daughter and him getting her to pose around the beautiful flowers showing off her braces. Beautfiul Job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very sweet images, such a relevant poem! Again, love your observations and your style. I like the gentle tone in this piece, very nice! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    I enjoyed the everyday matter of factness about this. A poloroid in poem form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I loved reading this! ..as I could just "picture" it happening. I like your style of writing... how you can take everyday things, and craft them into a beautiful poem , that brings a smile. :] BRILLIANT!