Quack

by Corinne   May 5, 2009


A Mallard
Waddled
Out of the pond
Quacking as he went

Where is my mate?
He seemed to say

Not finding her
On the grassy bank
He went back in the water
As my eyes followed

5th in a series written 4/25/09 at the Botanic Gardens

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    I'm so glad you enjoyed your trip to the gardens. Thanks for sharing the wonderful sights with us.
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Corinne,
    I do believe you could write something amazing about any subject you are given. I am so glad you were so imspired by your trip to the Botanical Gardens. It's almost as though I have gone on the trip with you as you have so craftfully created in your ongoing series of events during your trip. Wonderful Job.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely...
    loved how you have tried to understand the language of of the bird :)
    beautiful :)

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Very well written, Corinne! it's the simplicity that stands out in your poetry. well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Love to watch ducks and geese. Lots of them where I live. This was such a refreshing poem. Well done.

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