Comments : Stars

  • 7 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Beautiful write 5/5

    • 2 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hi Sheena. Thank you! I wrote this for a friend. His name is JEFRED. See his name formed by every first letter of every line.

      God Bless.

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a lovely and calming read which I really enjoyed.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 5 months ago

    by Fredy

    Really enjoy this piece! Love the last line!

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Mossgirl

    Beautifully written piece about stars. Lovely vivid imagination :)

    Well done

    Michaelx

  • 5 months ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This was a mesmerising verse, and very creative.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 5 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is beautiful.

    The stars in our night skies are so beautiful also.

    Yet I would not wish to be one.

    From where we view they seem so close, almost touching. Yet they are so far apart !

    I believe everyone of us is a star.

    Sometimes it's such a shame that we are so static.

    Thought provoking poem.

    Craig

    • 4 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hi Craig! Your comment is beautiful too. Thank you!

  • 4 months ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    Wow this is so beautiful :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    This is absolutely beautiful! Love it!

  • 4 months ago

    by SAKHILE INNOCENT MHLANGA

    A supernova, clears the fear of the past; charter a new record, that will last beyond the taken minds

  • 4 months ago

    by Nicko

    I find myself watching the night sky quite often especially when I can escape to the country. The sky is so much clearer and the stars so much closer, I almost feel as one with the glowing crystals.
    A lovely well written poem that can take readers like me on a sentimental journey ha
    "Eavesdropping to faint prayers whispered to the wind" a great line that adds real depth ... a great read ...

  • 4 months ago

    by Tony

    A wise meerkat once told me "They're fireflies, stuck up there in that great big blueish black thing."

    (Lion King reference)

    Loved it.

    • 4 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hi, Tony. Many thanks for checking this out and leaving a comment! I'm still stuck with your Nightmare in Oz. :-)

  • 4 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Beautiful x

  • 4 months ago

    by Phantom

    Beautiful poem. Close to what I feel when looking up into the night. I love to stargaze. This little poem catches that spirit nicely.

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Magical mossgirl

  • 3 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    Well praise poem. I like how you have described the theory of stars. Nice poem.

  • 3 months ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    Wow, the imagery in this is amazing! I love this :)

  • 3 months ago

    by fenix flight

    When I read this I think of all the times when I would run to the field near my mothers house and just lay down and watch the stars at night. this is simply beautiful and very well written. I can see the stars now just by your description.

  • 3 months ago

    by yogi73

    lovely poem. I like how you personified stars into our wishes...'Drop one by one in exchange for thy weary hearts wishes.'

  • 3 months ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Best poem.

  • 2 months ago

    by RustySoul

    What a lovely piece Mel..!! Can't help reading it again and again. Well done.