The Valley Of Lost.
by Mister 47 May 10, 2009
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When you walk alone in the valley of frost |
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14 years ago
I thought it was weird to have aabb and then switch in the third stanza to abab. It was a little offsetting. Aside from that it's one of your best poems. The flow was a little off in some parts, but other than that you did a pretty good job. I wish I could give you a 4.5.
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14 years ago
by nina
An other great poem from you
but wondering why you are back writing about sadness
i won't say more just once buddah said
""all that we are is the resukt of what we have though ""
stop writing about sadness ant it will for get about you dear -
14 years ago
by Jad
This was a very sad and thoughtful poem for me. The emotion in it was good though. The flow was good to but it seemed like you were forcing the words in some parts. The overall poem was good though and you did a great job.
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14 years ago
by Ingrid
When you talk and no one listen
And you cry and no one see
^^
I am here, Moucha! *hugs*
Such a sad poem.. mmmmhhh.....I don't like to think of you being this sad at all.
Whatever it is making your write these lines, try to either solve it or walk away, my friend.
*hugs*
5/5 Ingrid
