Congrats on the contest.....You did a wonderful job on this piece...It is hard to take a list of words and bring forth a poem from them.
Excellent job!
Love Mom

This is a dark one. Not sure if this is about death, ashes to ashes, etc., Well done.

Yeah it's really hard to make a poem within certain words. And you did a great job! Lines are fantastic!

Very thought provoking. I was going to say wow a lot of adjectives but it was a word challenge! So I will say what vivid imagery you have projected here!Nice to see you writing again!

Hello Ben,
Your mother, Cindy, told me you had an account on this site, so I couldn't resist after reading her lovely work.

This is an excellent, descriptive piece that is almost dreamy and lulling to read aloud, in a dark sort of a way! The layout works really well for this piece, too.
Well done and all the very best,
Ben