I liked it...but the end needs something... it kinda leaves you hanging unless you were aiming for that

Awww, now this poem does bring one or two songs to mind, but its obvious u have ur own way at this poem...i give it a 5/5 because like i say alot its relateable and touched me ^_^ very good! keep it up : )

This is my favorite poemmm. because you can picture it & im pretty sure most of us have wanted something we cant have ! (=

Isn't this like Taylor swifts you belong with me????
But anyways well written