Comments : Days of Sunny Glad Me Up

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Unusual but I like it, especially the title. Days of sunny glad me up. I shall have to read more of Cummings and you if you write more like this. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    I liked the write. It's very free flowing and refreshing!

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Corinne,
    As always your attempt at anything is always masterful. You have done a wonderful job with this.
    Great Job!
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    What a wonderful challenge you gave yourself :) Excellent job!
    (((hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very creative indeed, i really love your poems, always different.
    Great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very beautiful write...

    "Days of sunny glad me up
    before I fall in gloomy cups
    of blackish brew"

    ^^ I just so loved these lines... very capturing words and imagery :) well penned...

    "instead my eyes drink the light
    nectar
    elixir
    "
    ^^ there so much optimism in these lines...

    a wonderful read :)

  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    I'm not overly familiar with cummings but I enjoyed this on it's own merits. The wonderful opening line draws you in and what follows makes you think. Truly well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    AMAZING!..your a great poet Corrine. Very well done indeed!!