An Impossible Find

A sad, but superb write Kellyana. So well written and expressed . It touched a chord. lSometimes we feel so hopeless and alone in the world.. and that we will never find joy. But I believe theres a rainbow out there for all of us.. and that it will appear when they clouds have passed away,

Thanku for a very touching write Kellyana.
Best wishes,
Olwin

Hello kel,thanks for the comments.glad you wrote some words about my work.
compliment ´back for your excellent poems.
i give you 5/5 for this poem about life,
nice expressions of words.

giegielove

"I guess a happy mind is an impossible find. "

^^ ... so true... how we are never satisfied with what we have...

"Negativity all around cause eyes go blind
Hope being a treasure, difficult to rake
Happiness seems to be an impossible find. "
^^
Happiness seems impossible find ... but then we should know how to be happy in all circumstances... very well penned...

I loved the flow of your write... rhythem and smooth...

This is surely one of the best collab read. I really loved the theme as that made me think again and again. Also it made me realize that i am not the only one having such thoughts.
Great write indeed.

Hope to find more from you both in coming days.

all the best and take care

Kelleyana
nice job on this collab.

Clouded by unpleasant memories that nag the brain
In the web of despair I get myself entwined
Making things complex, life does not seem the same
I guess a happy mind is an impossible find

Happiness seems to always be just out of reach. You can see it and sometimes almost feel it but then it slips away.
Good job!
(((Hugs)))
Cindy