Rebirth

by Faithless   May 16, 2009


Living in a delusional world
Protest to live in reality
I found nirvana within me
As I meditate in tranquility

I'm drunk when I'm sober
Life begins when it's over
These uncomprehended words
Burst success as my failure

A twist of fate, I'm reincarnated
Possessing time within my hand
No longer do I need to wait
My future awaits for me to create

Embarking on a spiritual journey
Karma meliorates my destiny
As the cycle of life ends it's transaction
I emerged with a new identity

Awaken from my subconsciousness
Receiving pure enlightenment
Nature endorses my new beginning
As I witnessed the rebirth
of my new existence

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  • 13 years ago

    by CutMyArmToPieces

    I really like this the way you set it up and the words you used you can get a real sense of where your coming from in this piece. Good Job n hang in there.

  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow, this was amazing, i loved the flow and imagery. excellent poem 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Living in a delusional world
    Protest to live in reality
    I found nirvana within me
    As I meditate in tranquility

    A very good start to a excellent poem. Though it's my favorite only the tip of what is to come in the rest of the poem
    Enjoyable read

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I thought this poem was just amazing. It captured my attention from start to finish... A brilliant write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    Such a good poem Azzza :)

    "I'm drunk when I'm sober
    Life begins when it's over"
    ^Actually I discussed this with my sister and she was like: it should be "I'm sober when I'm drunk" but I myself still see this one good, removing fillers gives several choices.
    My fave lines..well done Azzza.

    Your rhyme someone misguided me..sometimes you rhymed the stanza, and sometimes you didn't..though your rhyme is often good. So I don't mind this.

    Great write!
    Write on

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