Comments : Swallow Me Up [Drown in the Rain]

  • 14 years ago

    by damont

    This poem made me wonder what inspired it

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...what a masterpiece this is. So sad I didn't come across is sooner so I could have nominated it. I really don't know what to say...this was so creative and different and I think that's what really draws me to your poems. I never read the same things twice. Never get sick of your word choice or how creative your titles are. You really have a good hang on how to be creative as well as controllinng your emotions. The emotions in this piece were intense with being too in your face or venting. I feel like you have found that balance between creativity and emotions that some other poets haven't found. I can honestly say this is one of your best poems and you should be very proud of your work. Nik