List: 3 down.. what next?

by David   May 19, 2009


Four in the morning
Tears fall down my face
My love has left and wont come back
This is my fall from grace

From a world so mellow, and so secure
To a world of grey
I am hurting and crying oh so much
Forever and a day

Denial
Heartache
Misery
Suicide
Peace..

I've denied that this has happened
I'll wake up and it'll just be a dream
Its more a nightmare, a future
Where we are not a team

Heartache and misery, are my new middle names
Tears my newest neighbors
Pain my only friend
I hate it! I loathe it!
I will be dying in the end. .

So what is left? Left on that list,
Only two criteria left to go
Soon oh so soon
David will be ...

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  • 8 years ago

    by CrazyNlove

    I love this i forgot how good u were. lol i love your poems.

  • 8 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Denial
    Heartache
    Misery
    Suicide
    Peace.."

    So simple, yet big on power and flow. It's been a while since I have read your stuff and you get better and better. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    "Heartache and misery, are my new middle names
    Tears my newest neighbors
    Pain my only friend
    I hate it! I loathe it!
    I will be dying in the end. ."

    My favourite part of the poem.. Very well written and constructed. The emotion is great.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    David:)

    It has been so long since you last posted a poem.
    Such a sad poem you have crafted....It's beautiful, like only you can make it...but I do not want to read this kind of stuff by you:/
    I want the sun to shine for you always, my beautiful, sweet, wonderful, gifted friend.
    I hope that, if this poem is real, she will soon return to you, sweetheart.
    It was such a pleasure to read your words on here again..two years have passed now since we first met and became friends..my first friend in the virtual world:)

    God bless you David, for always caring:)

    * hugs and kisses*

    5/5 Ingrid