Comments : Dusk ( Haiku)

  • 14 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Wow... This sounds eerie... Well... Just by visualizing an eagle over the top of a lake, it gets my hairs stand straight. A different visualisation and worth every word to read. Someday I would like to write this form and challenge my foresights.

    Well written.

    Regards,
    Bhavin aka Bugs

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow this was gorgeous and beautiful.. I wish I was able to experience such a beautiful scene as this myself.

    P.S - I hope your dog came out alright with her surgery!

    Take care.
    5/5 - Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Sunsets are beautiful things as well as sunrises. To add an eagle soaring to the scene, that is even more beautiful.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ooooohh now that is a lovely picture of
    nature you have painted! Loved this read!

  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    Stunning! With such little space you create beautiful well thought out pictures. 5/5,

    -mandy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    A vivid description of peace and tranquility.
    This takes me back to the times I would go down to the Scarborough Bluffs and watch the sunset.There's no eagle soaring over lake Ontario, but watching the Gulls swayed and dive over the calm and serene lake is a beautiful thing to experience.
    I've enjoyed reading this beautiful piece.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    A wonderful image you have created. I can see the scene clearly. . The sun slowly melts its deep orange blaze into the calm, soothing waters. The majesty and perfection of nature enters the picture, its shimmering power commands respect. Beat, beat, beat..the rhythmic beat of its huge feathered wings softly regulates the quiet, creating order in a world of random anomalies. Gliding in closer now to the water's surface, the water becomes like a mirror, reflecting both subtle and vivid hues of purple plumage, which merge seamlessly with the blazing deep orange/red of sun in a whispered current.

    In hues of plum wine,
    sunset soothes a serene lake.
    Lonely eagle soars.
    ^
    Ingrid, I hope you don't mind, but I thought you might like this suggestion?

    ((hugs)) xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Done!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Ingrid,
    Again, with such little room you have said and created so much. Imagery abounds in this little piece - brilliant writing!
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Beautiful imagery portrayed here, and in so few words! A masterpiece Ingrid!