Comments : When Will It End?

  • 14 years ago

    by Kurt

    Wow. The imagery and description are truly spectacular. I really want to say that this poem is about insomnia or paranoia. I can picture each and every stanza you wrote as a crystal clear image. This was intense emotionally and binds the reader to the end. If I had to make a complaint I would say that the ending was a bit abrupt and left me wanting a more detailed finish. However, this was a great write. 5/5 No doubt.

  • 14 years ago

    by groovydude

    Hi Tim, Sunny is my roommate so I coulnt vote also, but nice work.. i`ll read more, i`m groovydude.. talk to you

  • 14 years ago

    by Timothy

    Interesting write. Its been awhile since I read any of your work, May have to peruse more of it. Nice to see your heath condition didn't keep you from writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Tired of being alone in a crowded room
    screaming at top volume for it to end
    everyone moving in slow motion
    pretending to be true friends

    This verse is something I could releate to.
    A moving write that is soaked in a well of
    emotional sadness...take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Angie

    Thank you for your comment on my write...

    This piece is so emotional, filled with much pain and sorrow. The last stanza makes a powerful ending! Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Angie

    Damn, I'm sorry Tim, I couldnt vote on this one, Andreas my roomie and she already voted, so it wouldnt let me, but it truly deserves a 5...

  • 14 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow this is a very deep poem T,I see tha you have still got your creative flare!

  • 14 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Hmmmmm... interesting

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    I enjoyed the read very much, for me there was an overwhelming feeling of despair , Often we are alone even though there are people around, the worst kind of lonlieness. excellent job, thought provoking!

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I've lost touch with my favorites...Lost touch with this site it seems. I'm here..reading your words...still in amazement...you were always great but maybe I didn't appreciate it time a thousand as I am today. Can I get some of that medication please? lol

    No joking...nice write Mr. Timothy...seems even when you're surrounded you can feel the most alone you've ever felt. I enjoyed reading and will go on to read more! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashmore

    Good to see you are still writing. I doubt you remember me because I have changed my name so many times, but like I said good to see you still writing :)