Comments : Are you Paranoid?

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Only thing I would suggest is breaking up the last stanza.. its kind of reallly long compared to the first and second. Other than that, interesting write.. the words used creates that paranoia feeling and in your piece.. great write!

    5/5.
    Temps!

    Glad to see you writing again, btw! Its been a while. :]